Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Second Rough Draft: The Medici and Their Secrets to Success

In Florence during the time of the Italian Renaissance, a very influential family took power. The Medici family became the leading family of Florence, staying in power for a little over three generations; much longer than other families of the time. It was unusual for a ruling authority to be so well liked at the time, but they managed to achieve this because they were well educated, they genuinely cared about Florence, and they knew what it took to be good leaders. They founded an enormous bank that was widely popular; not only in Florence, but all over the country. Their prominence, however, sometimes faced some difficulties. Other Florentine families, like the Albizzi and Alberti, plotted against the Medici to try to take their position. Even though adversaries worked against them, the Medici had a prominent rule in Florence beginning with Cosimo and ending with Lorenzo during the Italian Renaissance because the they were not arrogant and they did not take their position for granted as they founded and maintained Europe's most prosperous bank; however, when subsequent Medici rulers did in fact start to stray from the usual fairness and started reaching too far into the pockets of the people and the church, the powerful bank collapsed -- along with the Medici rule.   
            The Medici’s were not always so well-known and popular. In fact, the family started out as far less notable than many other families of the time. The Medici’s slowly gained their prominent position through generations, with some family members being more well known than others. A few members of the family became well known in the 14th century for wool trade. The family’s rank as a whole was bumped up a bit later in the generations through a marriage. This gave them access to a more central authority position. Their involvement with a plot in 1400, however, resulted in their exile from Florentine politics for 20 years. Two members of the family managed to be excused from this exile, and they were the ones who started the famous Medici dynasty.
            Averardo de’ Medici was the first Medici to be in a position of real political power. He was not a very successful banker or businessman, and therefore did not do anything groundbreaking in his time of power, but he publicized the Medici name. His son, Giovanni di Bicci, had been well trained in business by his uncle, and he founded the Medici bank, which would later become the main source of the Medici’s power. Right when the bank was opened, the Medici’s power and money came flooding in, and although Giovanni became one of the richest men in Florence, he did not become the authority figure; that would be for the later Medici generations. The Medici bank was reliable, and more and more people came to like and respect the Medici family because of this.
            Founded in 1397, the Medici bank was the largest and most respected bank in Europe of its time. There are many improvements and innovations that the Medici’s came up with that revolutionized banking, including the development of the ledger system through the development of double entry system of tracking and debits. At one point, the currency of Europe was a coin made by the Medici based on a vote of the people. Although the initial rise of the bank brought Giovanni lots of fame and fortune, he was not the one that became head of state; his son Cosimo did.
            Cosimo was able to smoothly take control of the bank when Giovanni died. Nothing was disrupted or interfered with. Cosimo’s key to success was the fact that he tried to please the people. Whatever the people expected or wanted in a leader, they got it in Cosimo. Florentine people liked the idea of having a democracy, so Cosimo carefully stayed in control without technically holding any political offices. He used his plentiful wealth to control the voting, and thus was able to easily stay in power. His tricks did not bring dislike from his people; instead, they enjoyed his rule! In fact, Cosimo had so much power that other families felt threatened by him. These families conspired against him, and they were able to get him accused of something and sent to prison. Cosimo, however, had no intentions of going to prison. He turned the prison sentence into an exile, and when he left, he took his bank with them. He had such a large and loyal group of clients who all followed the bank wherever he took it. The population of Florence went way down, and eventually the exile had to be lifted so that they could come back to Florence. Cosimo, after gaining vast amounts of money and fame, passes away and leaves all of it for his son, Piero.
            When his father passed the bank onto him, Piero was all set and ready to go. He had already planned and prepared a financial overview and knew where he was going to take the bank. He made many people pay off outstanding loans that his father had just let be there, which did make some people very unhappy, but it only made the bank more successful. He was a good ruler despite the few unhappy people, continuing his family’s tradition of artistic patronage. His son Lorenzo de’ Medici was a bit more liked than him.
            Florence flourished under Lorenzo’s rule. Other jealous families targeted him, and he and his brother were once attacked. His brother was killed and Lorenzo was stabbed but luckily, he made it away alive. After this, Lorenzo made it a point to pursue peace in Florence, and there was a good balance of power between the northern Italian states. 

2 comments:

  1. "sometimes faced some difficulties"- take out sometimes
    you need some more commas in your thesis
    say "the Medici" instead of "the Medici's"
    "through a marriage"- what marriage?
    "Their involvement with a plot in 1400"- what plot?
    "Two members of the family managed to be excused from this exile"- which members?
    "Giovanni di Bicci, had been well trained in business by his uncle"- what was his uncle's name?
    "able to get him accused of something"- what did they accuse him of?
    "passes away"- passed away

    You definitely need more of a firm ending. My main advice is to elaborate on things, and add in details. Not only will it up your word count, but it will make your paper more interesting!

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  2. I had many of the same questions as Martha. I agree that adding more details would help to improve your paper. For example, at the paragraph about Lorenzo you could add in some details about how Florence flourished under Lorenzo's rule. Also, quotes and citations from primary sources would be good. Overall I enjoyed it and I'm sure it will be awesome when it's finished! (:

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